New Shot List

After looking at my filming and storyboards, I decided that the story of the advert is too complicated, and that simple ideas often prove to be more effective. I decided to simplify the story down to the protaganist getting ready, and an emphasis being on the time, from five to eight to eight O'clock. the clock ticking loudly above the classical music every few beats of the music, which builds the audience upto thinking something will happen at 8. Here is the shot list:
1) Make up in the mirror,
2) Looks at the time (clock ticks)
3) Puts on more make-up,
4) Smiles at flowers on dressing table,
5) Touches the flowers (maybe a card with her name on the flower bouquet)
6) Looks up at time (clock ticks again)
7) Gets up and puts on elegant dress,
8) clock ticks,
9) mans footsteps walking towards the door (clock ticks)
10) knock on door
11) she turns around and reaches into her draw
12) takes out a bottle of chanel no.5
13) puts back on dressing table, and runs to the front door,
14) opens door and slow motion into boyfriends arms.

The next two adverts i have decided to be the two next stages of the night. the second advert of their evening out where she maybe re-applys her purfume, and the third one the next morning at the boyfriends house, of her getting dressed again, and finding a gift box for her next to the bed, containing a bottle of chanel no.5.

I will start to film the first scenes tonight of advert one.